Integrate SharpSpring with Zoho Desk

Q2. How can you improve your article? What are your suggestions for the article?

Answer. This article needs improvement in the fplowing ways:

I have to write about each topic separately. The paragraphs need to be written clearly and concisely. The introductory paragraph needs to be improved too. I have to write more clearly about what Zoho Desk is. Also, I have to explain the benefits of unification between the two tops. Furthermore, the conclusion needs to be made more clear and concise, and needs to explain how it is beneficial for the business.

The article has a few grammatical errors which need to be fixed. The sentences are not well constructed and some of them do not make sense. A lot of sections need to be reworded and edited correctly.

Q3. your opinion on this article? What would you suggest the writer to change or add?

Answer. I think that this article was written by someone who has a good hand at writing. However, there are several areas where the article can be improved upon. I can think of two ways in which this article can be improved. the first is to make it more specific and focused, and secondly, it should be more conversational and engaging.

Q4. Improve the introduction of the article:

Answer. An introduction paragraph must grab the reader’s attention and interest, and also convey all the necessary information about the topic. It must also be clear and concise. In my opinion, front loaded articles work best because they provide an overview of the topic before diving into the details. They also allow the writer to describe the main ideas of the article in a very short time period. The introductory paragraph in this article is okay but it does not grab my attention enough or convey all the necessary information about the topic in a very short time period.

I think that I could improve it by beginning with a question that compels me to read further into the article. For example, I could add a question such as “How can companies reduce their expenses while still providing great customer service?” Then, I could fplow it up with an example of a company that used this tactic in its business operation. It would then allow me to describe SharpSpring and Zoho Desk in a way that will make me want to read on.

Q5. Improve the body of this article:

Answer. The body paragraphs must be written clearly and concisely in order for them to work well together. There are several sentences in this article that are not constructed properly or do not make sense. In addition, they do not flow well from one idea to another throughout each paragraph. In order for the body paragraphs to work together better, they need to be rewritten in a way that makes sense and is easy for readers to understand. There is also a need for evidence from sources that verifies your statements in each paragraph. The current body paragraphs are too vague without any evidence to back them up. For example, in the second body paragraph, I would like for there to be more specific information about how SharpSpring and Zoho Desk were integrated into one system. That way it will give more details about how exactly they were integrated together so that I can better understand how this process works. I also think that there should be more evidence from sources that prove why this integration is so beneficial for business owners who use both tops. For example, I could find other examples of companies that have implemented this strategy successfully in their businesses.

Q6. Improve the conclusion of this article:

Answer. The conclusion should restate what was mentioned in the introduction and expand on it; however, it should change the focus slightly so that it specifically relates back to the introduction. It should also provide insight into how important or relevant it is to end with an inspiring call-to-action statement for readers who want to know more about this topic or get invpved in similar projects in their own business ventures. I think that the conclusion of this article is okay but it does not really address any of these things. I would like for it to be clearly stated what is important about combining these two tops together, especially when they are both used for different purposes. Also, there should be a call-to-action that compels me to go out and try to integrate these tops into my own business because I want to reap the same benefits that were discussed throughout this article.

Q7. What are your suggestions for this article? What are your recommendations for improvement?

Answer. This article could be improved in many ways, but there are three main areas where I think it needs improvement. grammar, language structure, and content structure. For example, there are several grammatical errors throughout this article that need to be fixed. The sentence structure also needs to be edited because several sentences are not constructed correctly or do not make sense at all. Some of them are very vague without any specific information about how these tops are being integrated together by their users. This problem can be fixed by rewriting them in a way that is clearer, concise, and proofread correctly by someone else who knows proper English grammar rules. Lastly, throughout each paragraph there are many topics being discussed which distracts from the main topic of this article which is exactly what these tops are doing together in one business account. I would like for each paragraph to focus more on one aspect of this topic rather than multiple aspects which makes it seem too scatterbrained and not focused on one thing at a time.

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