Video 2 Editing your final script

Step 3 Video 2 Editing your final script

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March 20, 2020

Video Transcription: Okay so in this video we're going to look at answer for at the moment it reads a little bit awkward the multinational estate agents are too big to care and only have a national website a call centre and no local offices, This video is brought to you by Appy Pie’s Academy, so if you remember about this question it was all about what the concerns were of the client so if we just add on to the front here a little bit of copy so we can see who are worried about using so that that deals directly with their concerns if you think who are worried about using the multinational estate agents okay so we can see instead of multinational we can just say using international.

So let's have a look using a national stage well we know we're talking about a stage and so let's just put in their company so a national company and we're implying that the two big so we can get rid of the two big to care and we can see a national company that only the only uses a website so who are worried about using a national company that only uses a website I’ve got call centre so maybe we can change that to telesales and house yeah and has no I have no local offices will call up regional offices because we're talking about a national company so will speak about regional offices that just makes it sounds a little bit more consistent so we're really from the top four homeowners in the pink district that want to sell their home quickly and the highest possible price who was worried about using a national company that only uses website telesales and has no and have no regional offices that sounds a lot better than the original it's a lot cleaner and it's starting to flow okay so we'll go on to a question one in the next video. 

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