Step 3 Video 1 Editing your final script

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Video Transcription: Here we are at step, This video is brought to you by Appy Pie’s Academy, now this is where we're going to edit the actual copy the answers that we have actually put together in step one and two this is we're going to edit this to be more conversational in style the important thing about scripts for videos is that they are conversational so the listener hears it as though they're listening to a conversation it's a lot easier on the ear and it's a lot better at selling so let's have a look at what we've got here so we've got homeowners in the Peak District wishing to sell their property soon and the highest possible price right so let's make this a little bit more direct.

We'll put the word far in there so for homeowners in the Peak District and wishing maybe not the best of words maybe we can change that to that want to sell their property soon at the highest possible price that sounds better for homeowners in the Peak District that want to sell their property soon gain another word there that doesn't feel great is soon so let's put in there quickly and sounds a lot more positive so let's have a look for homeowners in the Peak District that want to sell their property quickly at the highest possible price that's got a real energy to it and it sounds more positive so I'm happy with that so we'll move on to the next one which is the answer for we'll move on to that in the next video.